Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matter that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A number of individuals think that permitting

children

to make their own choices on daily basis (

for example

food, attire, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of people who only think about their own wishes.

However

, some have

different

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opinion

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because it is crucial for

children

to make decisions about matters that affect them.

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essay will discuss both

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the contradicting views regarding the freedom of

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and how it will boost

them

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management

skill

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. It is commonly true that if

parents

easily

allowing

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youngsters to have

freedom

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to follow their desire without control and checking can lead them in becoming selfish grownups. They will believe that

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they

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the

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have the authority in every single

things

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because there

are

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no

one

can

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stop their wishes.

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,

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spoiled

children

will have a tantrum if their friends do not agree with them.

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happen

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because the

parents

always spoil them and

the

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lack of understanding that the world does not

evolve

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around them only.

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contradict, due to

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style, if the

parents

guide them right, the

children

will understand that they can

also

have

their

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control over something but it will affect not only

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their self

herself

theirself

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but their

surrounding

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.

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will encourage them in trying to be more responsible

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every single day

,

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because the actions taken

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themself will force them to select which

one

is the best and which

one

is the worst so they know what to choose. It will uplift their critical thinking skills too. In conclusion, allowing your

children

to pick what they want to do, what clothes they decide to wear, what food they want to eat, and other decisions

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a great style of teaching.

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will teach them

acout

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about

every action they choose will have consequences and they are the

one

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ones

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who

have

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responsibility

over

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it

it

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. Of

course

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parents

should give their guidance

first

for them not completely hands-off in giving the freedom

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the youngster.