For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this give details of how you have benefited from the club

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Dear Sir, In September 2003, I joined your Sports and Social club as a full-time student member. Since

then

I have paid the monthly membership fees by direct debit from my bank: Nationwide in Sanderson Avenue,

Kinghill

Correct your spelling

Kingshill

. I have thoroughly enjoyed my club membership as it has provided me with useful opportunities to meet up with other young people and to participate in a number of social activities. I have

also

been fortunate enough to play in some of the inter-club tennis tournaments and have taken advantage of the various classes available

such

as Yoga and T'ai chi.

However

, my studies are now coming to an end and as I will shortly be returning to my home country, possibly for good, I regret that I no longer wish to continue my membership. I would be grateful,

therefore

, if you could confirm in writing that the monthly fee will no longer be deducted from my bank account.

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The Closing

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Yours faithfully,

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Yours sincerely,

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Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

156 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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