The word is experiencing a dramatic increase in population, thus is causing problem not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also fir industrialised and developing nations. describe some of the problem that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least on possible solution.

There is a significant growth in
percentage
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of human birth,
however
, the vast majority of countries are not experts to deal with future issues of
this
trend,
such
as supplying foods,
creating
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and creating
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spaces for extending cities,
as a result
, these critical situations are important for securing human in
nowdays
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, so, I am going to bring some examples for
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topic and give my possible solutions in
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regard. At
first
, Birth growth is needed
to
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for
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more energy and food
resources
for living,
however
,
renowing
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renewing
resources
to provide all primary needs of
human
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humans
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is not possible for the population that
everyday
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is growing enormously, due to
this
,
depriviation
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deprivation
is the major effect of
this
phenomenon,
for example
, China has the most percentage of citizens among
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, while, according to local investigation is not be able to feed their new generation.
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,
in addition
of
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, providing
a
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shelter is the primary need for
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an individual
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individual
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individuals
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that
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so that
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everybody can be able living in their own life, and, it seems the infrastructures of housing have not suitable for numbers of people in future,
for example
, Iran as a developing country is experiencing population congestion these decades and there are extending cities to boarders, while,
this
area has not any spaces to manage demands of
this
part of
community
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the community
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, so,poverty is the direct effect of
this
untime
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progress,according to local studies, scientist have been revealed crime and violence are growing in
this
area due to lack of
infrastrucres
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infrastructures
infrastructure
of living
such
as housing and healthcare system. To summarize
up
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, population congestion
have
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caused
lack
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a lack
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of
resources
such
as
renowing
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renewing
resource of energy and food, alongside, the environment has not ready
for
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to
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accommodate
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accommodating
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this
part of
community
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the community
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, so, governments must enact rules to control
number
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a number
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of birth growth and invest the national budget to providing homes and energy
resources
for their future nations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dramatic increase
  • undeveloped countries
  • industrialised nations
  • resource strain
  • environmental degradation
  • food security
  • malnutrition
  • unemployment rates
  • economic instability
  • healthcare challenges
  • mortality rates
  • infectious diseases
  • urban overcrowding
  • strained infrastructure
  • pollution levels
  • educational resources
  • family planning programs
  • living standards
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