People have to spend more and more time to travel from their homes for jobs and study. What are the reasons ? How can we solve this problem?
Education
and employment are both Use synonyms
an
indispensable part of humankind, without Correct article usage
apply
this
individual's life Linking Words
do
not prosper. Despite Correct subject-verb agreement
does
this
, Linking Words
people
have to spend quality time Use synonyms
to commute
from their residents to reach Change the verb form
commuting
at
schools and workplaces. Remove the preposition
apply
This
essay will examine the reasons for Linking Words
this
problem before suggesting some possible solutions.
The most prominent reason Linking Words
people
have to Use synonyms
travel
long distances is Use synonyms
lack
of good schools and companies in order to provide quality Correct article usage
the lack
education
and higher wages. Many institutes imposed heavy fees Use synonyms
from
the students, but they have Change preposition
on
poor
Correct article usage
a poor
education
Use synonyms
system
Fix the agreement mistake
systems
as a result
, one has to migrate long distances to acquire Linking Words
best
Change the article
the best
education
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, many multinational companies are located in urban areas which forced the rural employees to Linking Words
travel
far away from their homes. Use synonyms
Consequently
, it Linking Words
consume
Change the verb form
consumes
high
cost of commute which is the major drawback for them. Correct article usage
a high
For instance
, In many developing countries like India where Linking Words
people
tend to have higher Use synonyms
travel
expenses compares to the standard of living.
The solutions are not simple. Use synonyms
To begin
with, Linking Words
government
should build more schools in Add an article
the government
countryside
to eliminate the commuting prices. Add an article
the countryside
Also
, parents will be less worried about their child Linking Words
from
facing any obstacles. Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, transportation authorities should develop more public transit Linking Words
system
Fix the agreement mistake
systems
at
every Change preposition
in
places
whether it is in the Change to a singular noun
place
villag
Correct your spelling
village
,
so that Remove the comma
apply
individual
can Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
travel
with ease. Take an example of a country Use synonyms
Japan
, where local Change preposition
in Japan
authority
introduce metro trains for Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
public
which is both cheap and safe. It Add an article
the public
a public
consume
very less time to reach Change the verb form
consumes
destination
Add an article
the destination
as a result
.
In conclusion, in Linking Words
this
contemporary Linking Words
world
Add a comma
,world
people
have to spend more time Use synonyms
in
commuting because of Change preposition
apply
lack
of proper transportation services. It can only solve by Correct article usage
the lack
authority
to circumvent the situation.Add an article
the authority
an authority
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