Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
It is a common belief that a majority of
people
choose to be self-employed which contributes to its advantages
. However
, there is a more persuasive argument that self-employ
has disadvantages more than advantages
.
On the one hand, self-employ
is free from the organizational culture of the company. Moreover
, it is accessible to time
management. Furthermore
, whatever makes an effort that leads to profits, is proportionate to effort. In particular
, self-employ
has no regular retirement. For example
, without the company's organizational culture, it leads to less stress, which might contribute to health problems. It is a positive thing. Moreover
, easy to control by time
management. Therefore
, we can be with our families more than work in companies or more focus on personal time
in spare time
. However
, most advantages
are no retirement, and we can monopolize without distribution of profit. It is no doubt.
Nevertheless
, we can see a few advantages
that self-employ
is unsafe than working in a company—moreover
, many people
who choose to self-employ
lead to heavy competition. Furthermore
, increasing self-employ
contributes to native national economic growth. For instance
, according to research, the self-employ
shutdown proportion is more than 70%, challenging to survive and too risky. Moreover
, heavy competition contributes to increased stress, which leads to health problems. Furthermore
, it is relevant to native effects on national competitiveness. Also
, most people
are forced out of self-employ
because there is not enough decent work, which means society is unstable.
To sum up, while there are some advantages
that many people
choose to be self-employed. The disadvantages outweigh the advantages
.Submitted by wagamamabouya on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?