In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study aboard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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I am going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the development
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more opportunities to study abroad. Some of them include better
education
and
also
higher taxes. To start with the positive side pupils that have the ability to move to another country with the purpose of finding better
education
, often end up in a better position in life. Not only does it make you more responsible but
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gives you the chance of choosing a more appropriate system of learning by a single’s liking.
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if we look at Bulgaria’s educational method, we can conclude that it doesn’t include enough curricula,
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to some more developed countries in the sphere of learning. In my opinion, pedagogical experts are
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but
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foreign students and universities offer higher academic achievements in different study spheres.
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new settings, some even never do. The idea of getting apart from your home and family is not helping for
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later on studies and may affect mental health. That’s one reason
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give up on the university they’ve chosen. Another con is the fact that most faculties outside of your country are more expensive, even require higher taxes not only for
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but
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for accommodation and transport from home to the
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country.
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institutions but
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apartments
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are a lot more expensive. Overall, we can conclude that
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kind of choice depends on the person. The positives are that you may get better higher
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the negative side of the discussion is that some people fail to get their taxes paid or have issues being far from home.
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