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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study aboard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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 I am going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the development
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 more opportunities to study abroad. Some of them include better
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 higher taxes. To start with the positive side pupils that have the ability to move to another country with the purpose of finding better
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 if we look at Bulgaria’s educational method, we can conclude that it doesn’t include enough curricula,
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foreign students and universities offer higher academic achievements in different study spheres.
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give up on the university they’ve chosen. Another con is the fact that most faculties outside of your country are more expensive, even require higher taxes not only for
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 the negative side of the discussion is that some people fail to get their taxes paid or have issues being far from home.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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