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Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask some more questions about the trip

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Dear Sir, I was delighted to know about the international UK
trip
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 for your school
students
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. I learnt from my son who is a student in the eighth grade that a few parents could tag along for
this
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trip
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 and I would like to express my interest
for
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 the same. I am
into
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travel
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the travel
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 industry and handle foreign destinations with ease. I have many contacts in the UK to have a
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hassle-free
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hassle free
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 school
trip
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.
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, I could arrange a
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museum
musuem
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museum
 tour to enlighten
students
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with
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 the rich history. I am a calm person and can handle
students
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 patiently. Apart from
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, I can entertain
students
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 at night by telling them inspiring stories, and have
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basic
first
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 aid knowledge too if any
unprecendented
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unprecedented
 situation arises during the
trip
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. I would like to know the exact dates because I want to keep my calendar free for the vacation.
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, kindly let me know the documents that will be required for me to carry during our tour. Looking forward to
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 exciting educational tour. Kind regards, Devika
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