You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

Dear Mr/Mrs, Hello, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
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letter to enquire more information about the English program.  I came across your school website by chance. I'd like to know more about your school,
for example
, its address, history, qualification, etc. I
also
want to know if there is anything I need to prepare before coming. As for the accommodation, I prefer a single room because it is much more comfortable living by myself. At the same time, I would like to plant some flowers during my stay, so having a balcony attached to the room is a preferable option for me. By the way, I will bring my pets with me. If it is possible, I may request a shelter for my dog, Lily. Lily not only has a cute appearance
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but
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possesses a mild temperament. Don't you need to worry he will bark all night
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