People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Human beings in
this
century live an excellent quality of
life
in comparison to the past centuries.
This
essay intends to compare both eras and in my
opinion
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living standards have improved recently,
this
will be explained in the following paragraph with an example. Let's begin with an old adage, need is the mother of an invention.
This
means folks in the old centuries were surviving on whatever they had,
however
,
this
was not enough for them to survive in day-to-day
life
with no proper housing, transportation, and
technology
. Mostly, people were spending a tremendous amount of time doing laborious tasks without proper machines.
For example
, previously there was no
technology
,
hence
, farmers
together with
their families were digging the land manually for several months in the hope of water.
Furthermore
, some historians have written that pupils were walking several miles for schooling
due to
the lack of proper transport facilities. In the recent era, transportation and technologies have made community
life
convenient.
Firstly
, people can commute easily from one place to another with the use of great infrastructure that connects multiple cities.
Secondly
, with evolving
technology
person
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people
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could finish the work efficiently in a shorter time. To add to
this
, technologies like the
internet
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has
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have
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brought communities closer with
frequently
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and easy ways of communication. To illustrate, a recent survey found that more than 80 per cent population around the globe has proper housing and living a better
life
with the use of
technology
that includes airways, the internet, mobile phones and medical equipment.
To conclude
, it's true that human beings are living a better lifestyle than folks from the 18th or 19th centuries. As mentioned above, I agree that
technology
has
bought
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made
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a great difference by improving the living standard and making the daily
life
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lives
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of people easy and convenient.
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