Demand for oil and gas is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity.do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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The importance of finding new sources of coat in virgin spaces with cutting-edge technology which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming it would destroy the environment, meanwhile, it could increase worldwide oil supply.
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will lead to a logical conclusion. On the one hand, the most advantageous aspect of researching a new area for mining grease is the advent of enormous supplies;
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, adding new mining fields in several places could raise the grease supply
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limited to only 47 years.
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, the economic sanction that Russia got caused the price of gas to rocket. Meanwhile, the solving mechanism can only be given if countries have other mining-producing petroleum.
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, many mining locations were destroyed and
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adverse effects on nature so much. Often, the mining company exploits the lands and does not give feedback to the green belt.
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, Aneka Tambang in Indonesia did not have a company regulation to preserve the nature that they have exploited.
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, the land of the mining field becomes dry and the plants cannot grow in the field.
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, it brings some economic value and jobs for local people near the mines.
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, there is no doubt that the effects of finding new resources for petrol are not entirely positive and could destroy the environment.
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, the benefits brought by the finding of grease outweigh the drawbacks that help us achieve our target when we are found.
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