It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages

It is undeniable that taking

risk

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risks

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has significant

impacts

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impact

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on

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individual's

individula’s

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individuals’s

personal and career lives . I go along with

this

view that creat

risks

will be positive on the whole and will have

potential

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for growth and

dvancement

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advancement

. Critics of

this

trend suggest that people without

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accepting

acepting

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accepting

risks

do not have

any

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opportunity to make

progress

in their careers.

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argument rests on the fact that the rate of

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productivity and creativity are

decreaing

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decreasing

in some

well known

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compoines

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companies

due to the fact that

emlpoyees

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employees

are content with their position in society. As well as , Most of the young generations have faced problems in their personal relationship.they do not have a tendency to recognize people and establish

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a relationship

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relationship

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relationships

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with peers because of

lack

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a lack

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of

accpeting

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accepting

risks

.The result of

this

is that

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majority of adults are faced with psychological

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problems

probles

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problems

such

as

deprresion

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depression

,

anxiety

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and anxiety

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. Proponents of taking

risks

,

on the other hand

, argue the

tengible

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tangible

ramifications concerning

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progress

in your position works . Ambitious people are more likely to become successful in their

career

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careers

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by chasing their dreams in fields which have lots of challenging and

risks

. They understand that

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risks

not only

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them

opportunity

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to

saisfy

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satisfy

their

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need

,

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but

also

is the way for making

progress

to have promotion

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work.

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, some advanced countries

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believe

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belive

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that one of the crucial responsibilities of government is that

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prepare

prepar

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prepare

infrastructures for teenagers and

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teach

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tech

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them how to establish and develop

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relationships

relationship

realtionship

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relationships

with their genders , because of that most of them do not

any

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bstcales

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obstacles

in their future In Conclusion , taking

risks

will have been direct

impacts

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impact

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on people’s growth and

progress

in order to personal or official lives. I appreciate

this

point of view that one of the

pragmatice

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pragmatic

pragmatics

cause

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causes

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of

risks

is improving your

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.