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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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In
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 are created just to fulfil
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's leisure time.
Movies
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 have numerous genres, and some folks commend that
action
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movieaction
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movie action
movies action
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,
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 are
deaigned
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designed
 to make the audience wonder about themselves, while others opine that they are designed to entertain
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. In my point of view, I prefer to watch
action
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movies
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 rather than any kind of
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. To commence with,
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movies
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 have lots of plot twists, and it makes
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 feel astonishing
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 every single scene. To exemplify
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, most of
time
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, there will be
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 fighting scene and
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 what makes it distinct from other
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 genres.
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,
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 kind of
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 is not applicable to every age level, which means that most of the time, it is only for 18 years and above.
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, Mission Impossible
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was nominated
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one
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 of the best
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movies
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 for the Oscar Award.
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, the ironic about
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are
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 a production usually hires well-known artists to play a major role.
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, it can
caught
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be caught
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 many
people
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's eyes on the
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, as it is
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 of the marketing strategies.
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, the role played by
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 artist is prominent since they
to
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ensure that the
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 can achieve the spectator's expectations. The
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 are more likely
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target
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at
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youngsters and adults compared to old folks because they are blindsided by
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' hype, chiefly on
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social media. In a nutshell, it is undeniable that
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movies
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 are
one
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 of the best
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movies'
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genre
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, but
on
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contrast
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 we cannot turn a blind eye to other
type
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types
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genres
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of genres
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 as every
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 of them has
their
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its
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 merits and demerits.

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