Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In
this
contemporary epoch, a section of society holds a belief that
movies
are created just to fulfil
people
's leisure time.
Movies
have numerous genres, and some folks commend that
action
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movie action
movies action
movies
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are
deaigned
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designed
to make the audience wonder about themselves, while others opine that they are designed to entertain
people
. In my point of view, I prefer to watch
action
movies
rather than any kind of
movie
. To commence with,
action
movies
have lots of plot twists, and it makes
people
feel astonishing
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every single scene. To exemplify
further
, most of
time
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, there will be
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fighting scene and
that is
what makes it distinct from other
movie
genres.
Therefore
,
this
kind of
movie
is not applicable to every age level, which means that most of the time, it is only for 18 years and above.
For instance
, Mission Impossible
,
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was nominated
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of the best
action
movies
for the Oscar Award.
On the other hand
, the ironic about
action
movies
are
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a production usually hires well-known artists to play a major role.
Consequently
, it can
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many
people
's eyes on the
movie
, as it is
one
of the marketing strategies.
in addition
, the role played by
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artist is prominent since they
to
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ensure that the
movies
can achieve the spectator's expectations. The
movies
are more likely
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at
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youngsters and adults compared to old folks because they are blindsided by
movies
' hype, chiefly on
the
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social media. In a nutshell, it is undeniable that
action
movies
are
one
of the best
movies'
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genre
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, but
on
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contrast
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we cannot turn a blind eye to other
type
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types
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genres
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of genres
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as every
one
of them has
their
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merits and demerits.
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