Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: 1. thank them for the holiday and the photos 2. explain why you didn't write earlier 3. invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear Abhinav and Saxena, How are you both? I hope

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letter finds you well. I've just received photos, you guys sent me, of our wonderful holiday at your place

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month. Thank you so much for the lovely photos as they have reminded me of the wonderful moments we had spent together. You pampered me so thoroughly that I feel completely rejuvenated and refreshed after the holidays. It was so kind of you to stay me put at your place in Melbourne. Sorry, it has taken me too long to write back and thank you. The thing is, without boring you with details, I've been put under a huge amount of pressure at work to finish a certain task in an unreasonable timeframe, immediately after I joined my office back in Abu Dhabi. If it were not for the resulting stress clouding my brain, I would've written to you sooner. Anyways, my birthday is coming up on the 22nd of August and I want you guys to join me for the party.

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is going to be your

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trip to UAE, you guys must stay with me.

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, my family would be delighted to meet you both. I really hope you can make it. Take care, Rubina

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

211 words

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hospitality
memorable
appreciate
relive
extend an invitation
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