Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones.why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Most children are allowed to use smartphones by their parents in

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new age.

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is believed to help them become familiar with gadgets

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as handsets. They end up using. These smartphones to watch cartoons,play games,and take photos.

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result

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they get too attached to their phones that they spend most of their

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could have both positive and negative effects on them

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,the advantages could be more than the drawbacks.

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when given the opportunity of having a smartphone use it wisely with parental control.Their parents

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them from using the phone for a particular period of

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, they can only have access to it

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playtimes for games and educative films or cartoons.

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will help

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kids to learn more and prevent them from spending excess

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on their phones. Other kids that are not controlled by their parents could be affected negatively as

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results in the misuse of their handset or

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smart phones

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.They end up browsing the internet through it and discovering various sites that could influence them in a bad way,

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instance

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pornographic sites .They can

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results

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in chat groups,dating sites and so on. In my opinion,I believe,it's a bad development for kids to have access to their

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over a long period of

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,as it will deprive the children

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achieving some other goals. It could

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lead to distractions from studies .

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,it could lead to eye defects too.