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Some people support modern developments in agriculture such as factory farming and creation of new types of fruits and vegetables. However, other people oppose this view. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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developed agriculture to be controversial, some individuals claiming factory farming is not safe, and others revers think. I believe we should notice two aspects. On the one hand, people support the advanced methods of farming
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 as factory farming and genetic change in fruits and vegetables believe that these ways have increased the agricultural products by protecting crops and
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 from various environmental threats
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 changing temperature ,some diseases,
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 crops and
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 are kept indoors factors and outer factors.
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 now we could produce any crop and rear any animal regardless of their natural habitat , or climatic condition, and we have any cops in any season.
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, opposing people say modern techniques have affected the food quality by adding harmful chemicals in them and
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 leading to health issues for their consumers and
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.According to them, traditional agricultural methods are better,as they do not use any artificial material for nurturing crops and
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 all of the things that use is natural and , every time is merely dependent on the available natural resources.
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 group of people like to follow those old methods in order to have a healthy, pure and organic diet. In conclusion,I believe modern agriculture is good because they have made us able to have food in extreme
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, these developed techniques should not be over-used as they decrease the quality content of plants as well as
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 and produce any problems
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