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In today's job market, it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future job applicants may not need any formal qualifcations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#job #market #skills #future #applicants #qualifcations
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Nowadays, the employee
market
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 meets challenges which necessary for both practical
skills
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 and theoretical.
However
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, people argue that formal education is not needed for a
job
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 in the future. In the
job
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 position that soft and hard
skills
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 are essential. The applicants have to show their capabilities in every condition. So the companies will trust and pick them on their
job
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market
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. The performance in the
job
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market
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 considers many various aspects.
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, people who work in formal is not needed only the title of their education. But
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 they have the practical knowledge to help them work ineffective.
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, the informal advertisement that assumes need more hard
skills
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 needs formal understanding so they will use their
skills
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 efficiently.
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, globalization creates a higher expectation of the quality of the worker. The Companies asked for more details about the
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 requirement which combine mechanical and theoretical
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.
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, the growth of technologies urges society to have good
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 ,especially multitasking.
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, multitasking
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 are considered with various indicators
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 as critical thinking, computerised
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, and emotional
skills
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 than conventional or manual work. The challenges of the future condition of
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 markets should not balance both the practical and theoretical
skills
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. People have to be aware that having good hard
skills
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 is not enough. It is because the result of hard
skills
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 can maximize without theoretical
skills
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. In conclusion that I disagree that formal qualification is not needed need for the
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 advertisement.
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 the employee
market
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 still needs both formal education and practical knowledge to reach the company's goals.
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