You stayed at a friend’s house last weekend. Write a letter thanking them for their hospitality. In your letter: - Describe what you enjoyed about the stay. - Mention something specific about their home. - Invite them to your place in return.

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Dear Joey, I hope you are doing well. I want to express my heartfelt thanks for your wonderful hospitality

last

weekend. Though the whole stay was a memorable one, the bone-fire moments were the most enjoyable for me. The song that you dedicated to our childhood times left me spellbound.

In Particular

, I am highly engrossed with the beautiful design of your residence which has almost all the facilities like the swimming pool and a garden in the backyard. The rooftop grass mats were so stunning and I still have not gotten over my stay at

this

beautiful home.

Lastly

, it will be a great gesture if you accept my invitation to visit our place next month. Honestly, when I told my family about the naughtiness of your son, they all showed a keen interest in spending two to three days with the little angel and I hope you will soon make up a plan for my request. I can’t wait to see you soon. Yours loving friend, Jacob

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task achievement

In the phrase 'bone-fire moments,' consider the correct spelling 'bonfire moments.'

coherence cohesion

Try to ensure consistency in tense usage. 'The song that you dedicated to our childhood times left me spellbound' can be simplified for smoother readability, e.g., 'The song you sang to reminisce about our childhood was spellbinding.'

task achievement

The letter has a warm and friendly tone, appropriate for the context.

coherence cohesion

Well-organized structure with a clear beginning, middle, and end.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph effectively follows a single idea, contributing to overall clarity.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

169 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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