In spite of the advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry. why is this case ? what can be done ?

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We are getting surrounded by
plastics
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everywhere, be it the food we eat which mostly comes packaged in
plastic
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or the water we drink from
plastic
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bottles or the
plastic
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bags that we
use
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for our utility. Since
plastics
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do not decompose back into the soil, they have become a nuisance for our
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environment
enviornment
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environment
and to the planet. Most of the
plastic
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that we
use
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end
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up piling in the garbage dump and some enter the ocean causing havoc in the oceanic ecosystem. In my opinion, before the dumped
plastics
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cause
an
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irreversible damage to our
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environment
enviornment
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environment
, it is the responsibility of both the government and individuals to arrest
this
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problem. As we have seen in several studies and documentaries,
the
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oceanic life is getting really disturbed by the
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waste entering our oceans and impacting marine lives.
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i
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personally have seen people dump their
plastic
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waste in places of nature and tourism which
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impacts the animal habitat and
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wildlife
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wild life
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wildlife
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.
Plastic
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waste when burnt in the dumping grounds
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up to
the
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air pollution. Micro
plastic
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are
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also
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known to be one of the reasons
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cancer. I feel
,
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we are far away from absolving
this
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plastic
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problem unless the government frames stricter laws
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as banning the
use
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of single-
use
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plastic
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.
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, the government could incentivize organizations
who
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that
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use
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organic material for
packaging
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the packaging
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of their goods. We as individuals
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have an equal role to play as the governments. We should be using lesser and lesser
plastic
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as much
possible
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as possible
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,
for example
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carry
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a cloth bag when going
for
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shopping and using metal or glass water bottles
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of
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water bottles.
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i
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believe,
if
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that if
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we religiously follow the concept of 3Rs - Reduce, Recycle and Reuse of
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then
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we can easily reduce
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aggravating problem that
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are causing to our
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environment
enviornment
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environment
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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