The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
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The two given pictures illustrate the information regarding a modification made to a university sports
court
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between 1990 and the present. In general, the university sports
court
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recorded a moderate modernization, with the addition, relocation and replacement of several facilities.
To begin
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with, the park with
the
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large number of trees was demolished to make way for a new basketball
court
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which is in the top
left hand
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corner .
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, the tennis
court
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in the southeast of the map has been increased in size and relocated to the original site of the car park.
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, the outdoor pool in the top
right hand
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corner has been converted into the indoor pool
while
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the old tennis
court
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opposite the changing room vanished to make way for a new fitness
center
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. Despite all the changes that have taken place, there are still many old features that could be found. First and foremost, the reception and the cafe behind it have remained unchanged. Meanwhile,
further
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expansion from
the
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west to east has
undergone
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in the changing room
next
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to the fitness
center
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centre
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