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The two given pictures illustrate the information regarding a modification made to a university sports

court

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between 1990 and the present. In general, the university sports

court

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recorded a moderate modernization, with the addition, relocation and replacement of several facilities.

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with, the park with

the

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large number of trees was demolished to make way for a new basketball

court

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which is in the top

left hand

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corner .

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, the tennis

court

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in the southeast of the map has been increased in size and relocated to the original site of the car park.

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, the outdoor pool in the top

right hand

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corner has been converted into the indoor pool

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the old tennis

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opposite the changing room vanished to make way for a new fitness

center

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centre

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. Despite all the changes that have taken place, there are still many old features that could be found. First and foremost, the reception and the cafe behind it have remained unchanged. Meanwhile,

further

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expansion from

the

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west to east has

undergone

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in the changing room

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to the fitness

center

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centre

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

180 words

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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

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