Your local council is closing the children’s playground in your locality as not many children visit the park. Write a letter to the council requesting not to close it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Anirban Banerjee, a resident of Azad

nagar

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which is part of your local council. I came to know that the

playground

of Azad Nagar is getting closed and

hence

I am writing

this

letter to you, requesting you to not close it down. The

playground

is being used on a daily basis by the children from our Area to play various sports.

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In fact

Infact

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In fact

, in our family itself, three generations have played sports on

this

ground. It was used by my father as well as me during our childhood and now it is getting used by my children to play cricket, football, badminton and other games. It is the only recreational area in the entire Azad Nagar and shutting it down would

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severely

severly

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severely

impact the youth.

Moreover

, I came to know that

this

ground is being planned to be given to a developer to build a shopping mall. I have to suggest that, since there is already an existing shopping mall in our area, we do not need one more.

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Infact

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, there are no other

playground

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and

hence

the necessity to maintain

this

one becomes even more essential. I believe, sports

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are

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quite essential for

development

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the development

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of a child and we cannot just snatch that right from him or her.

Hence

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humbly request you to rethink

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your decision and take action towards reverting it back. The residents of our locality need

this

playground

. I would highly appreciate your quick action to withdraw the order to close our

playground

. Thanking you in advance. Yours sincerely, Anirban Banerjee

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Clear and correct grammar

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263 words

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Your local council is closing the children’s playground in your locality as not many children visit the park. Write a letter to the council requesting not to close it

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s opinions and ideas. Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

Overpopulaiton in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. what are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

Some people say that the only reason for learning a new foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.