Your local council is closing the children’s playground in your locality as not many children visit the park. Write a letter to the council requesting not to close it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Anirban Banerjee, a resident of Azad

nagar

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Nagar

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which is part of your local council. I came to know that the

playground

of Azad Nagar is getting closed and

hence

I am writing

this

letter to you, requesting you to not close it down. The

playground

is being used on a daily basis by the children from our Area to play various sports.

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In fact

Infact

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In fact

, in our family itself, three generations have played sports on

this

ground. It was used by my father as well as me during our childhood and now it is getting used by my children to play cricket, football, badminton and other games. It is the only recreational area in the entire Azad Nagar and shutting it down would

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severely

severly

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severely

impact the youth.

Moreover

, I came to know that

this

ground is being planned to be given to a developer to build a shopping mall. I have to suggest that, since there is already an existing shopping mall in our area, we do not need one more.

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Infact

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, there are no other

playground

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and

hence

the necessity to maintain

this

one becomes even more essential. I believe, sports

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are

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quite essential for

development

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the development

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of a child and we cannot just snatch that right from him or her.

Hence

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humbly request you to rethink

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your decision and take action towards reverting it back. The residents of our locality need

this

playground

. I would highly appreciate your quick action to withdraw the order to close our

playground

. Thanking you in advance. Yours sincerely, Anirban Banerjee

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

263 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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Your local council is closing the children’s playground in your locality as not many children visit the park. Write a letter to the council requesting not to close it

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

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You have been looking for a job and have seen a job advertisement for a part-time position. Write a letter to the employer. In your letter explain why you need the job; describe your skills and qualifications; say what days you are available.

The popularity of tourism is increasing day by day. There are many benefits of tourism, but it also creates some problems. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+