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computer these days can translate all kinds of language with greatee accuracy.Hence, our children will not need to learn more language in the future. Do you agree or disagree?

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Technology
 has become so advanced that it can translate any
language
. Many people believe that because of technological support, teaching children any additional
language
 is no longer necessary. In the forthcoming paragraph, I will discuss both the point of view and conclude the opinion.
First
 of all, Communication through
technology
 leads to a lack of understanding among people.
Furthermore
, it’s the same words having different meanings in a different context.
Likewise
, different words can have the same meaning. Using a particular word in a particular context required special intelligence that a computer does not possess.
For Instance
, Club, Band, association and group are all synonyms of society. But not all of them can fit in one particular context,
Also
 a
language
 expresses a culture that humans can understand well. At the same time, over-dependency on computers affects children’s personal growth. While the children are exposed to
technology
 to translate
language
 they never use their intellectual abilities, which hinders our abilities to solve complex problems.
Furthermore
, in the absence of
technology
 the one who used to translate things using gadgets will become a disable to interact with other languages people.
For Example
, visiting a remote area or other countries there could be a time when we do not have internet connectivity or gadgets not working due to lack of power. In those
situations
Add a comma
,situations
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 we need to develop learning skills to develop communication with locals. In conclusion, In my opine over-dependency on
technology
 may spoil your intellectual development.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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