Many people are afraid to leave their home because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crimes but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both view and give your own opinion
In recent years, a large number of
people
are scared of going out of their homes for the reason of becoming victims of Use synonyms
crime
. Some Use synonyms
people
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that number of ways can be used to prevent Add a missing verb
are content
crime
while other Use synonyms
people
argue that nothing can be done to prevent it. From my point of view, Use synonyms
although
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crime
nowadays can become harder to deal with, some measures could be taken to reduce the Use synonyms
crime
rate.
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Firstly
, it is obvious that Linking Words
although
a variety of solutions were tried/applied/ the percentage of Linking Words
crime
did not change. To be more precise, the crimes are becoming more organized and well-planned. As a consequence, it is impossible for authority and government officials to take any actions against these criminal cases. As an illustration, in Vietnam, numerous Use synonyms
people
do not want to help anybody in public places Use synonyms
such
as bus stations, parks etc because there were many cases where the drug trafficking offender asked them for Linking Words
helping
to hold or transport something that had heroin inside. In these cases, accidentally they became the offenders
Despite the aforementioned ideas, I strongly support the argument that there Replace the word
help
are
a great figure of feasible solutions that can decrease the proportion of Change the verb form
is
crime
. As an illustration, in any Use synonyms
countries
, there are several young police willing to pretend to be a law-breaker to penetrate into the criminal organization so that they can have deep knowledge of the structure of Fix the agreement mistake
country
crime
’s activities. In Use synonyms
this
way, they cannot only prevent particular crimes but are Linking Words
also
able to make Linking Words
people
’s life become safer. In fact, a lot of case studies proved that Use synonyms
this
is one of the most effective solutions that reduced a huge number of serious crimes .Linking Words
Besides
, the government should take laws stricter and punishments. Linking Words
This
could increase fines and penalties for Linking Words
people
who commit illegal acts.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
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crime
is a major problem in some cities, I think, that Use synonyms
crime
can be prevented through appropriate action by the government and individuals.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite