Some people prefer to eat food at food stands or restaurant. Other people prefer and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Give reason for your answer?

People
have five basic needs,
eating
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and eating
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food
is
one
of them. Without eating
food
,
people
can not survive.
People
has
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have
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to eat
food
to stand in
this
competitive world. To do so
people
choose their own eating way consequent to their affordability. Some
people
loves
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to eat restaurant foods while others
loves
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love
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to eat their own
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homemade
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home made
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homemade
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foods. Both
side
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have strong arguments but in case of my
opinion
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I choose
home
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a home
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to eat
food
. It is true that eating
food
on
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in
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restaurant
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a restaurant
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ia
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is
more enjoyable than
home
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at home
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. Restaurant
foods
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arefoods
werefoods
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always more delicious than
home
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at home
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.
For example
, in a
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restaurant
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restaurant
resturent
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they have always a professional
cooker
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cook
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who
have
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has
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highly training
about
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in
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food
and he
know
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knows
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all the techniques how to cook
a
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food
a portion of food
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food
to eat
more tasty
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tastier
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.
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In
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the home
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home
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you cannot cook
food
like a professional cooker.
Besides
,
one
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restaurant
resturent
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restaurant
saves
people
time.
One
people
who eat
food
on
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at
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home
,
they
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apply
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have to make
food
first
home
. In doing these they
wast
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waste
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a lot of time.
Moreover
in
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restaurant
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the resturent
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resturent
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restaurants
people
can
saw
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see
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and
to
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apply
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tast
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test
taste
last
different types of
food
. Almost most types of
food
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across
acroos
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across
the world, a well-known
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restaurant
resturant
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restaurant
can provide. But
in
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at
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home
one
people
cannot cook more than two or three types of other
countries
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food
. Thinking
all
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of all
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these
opinion
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opinions
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, some
people
opine to eat
food
on
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at
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restaurant
restaurants
resturant
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restaurants
or
food
stands.
On the other hand
,
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homemade
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home made
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homemade
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food
always
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is always
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more
hygenic
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hygienic
and fresh than
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restaurant
resturant
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restaurants
or
food
stand.
Restutant
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Restaurant
Restaurants
are
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is
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not salubrious as like as
home
-made
food
. In our
country
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,country
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resturent
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restaurants
got
punish
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punished
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for their unhealthy environment usally and it is common
things
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thing
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.
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,
few
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a few
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days ago two famous
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restaurant
restaurants
resturant
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restaurants
in our city
name
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as
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apply
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“Panshi” and “Pachbhai” got chastisement by our local administration for
found
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founding
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a
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hair in rice and other spurious found in their kitchen.
Moreover
,
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restaurant
restaurants
resturant
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restaurants
are
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always maintain a big amount of money.
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Homemade
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Home made
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Homemade
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food
are
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is
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always affordable.
For example
,
one
people
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person
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who eat
food
on
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in
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restaurant
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a resturant
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resturant
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restaurant
and
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that's
that
thats
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that's
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the amount of money spent there,
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in-home
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in
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at
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home
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the home
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five
people
eat together in
these
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this
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amount of money.
Middle class
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and poor
people
can’t afford it. In my opinion, I prefer to eat
food
in
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at
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home
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the home
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. I am a man who always
be
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is
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careful
carefull
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careful
about health and hygenicness. So
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that's
thats
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that's
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why I prefer
home
to eat
food
.
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