Some people prefer to eat food at food stands or restaurant. Other people prefer and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Give reason for your answer?

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People

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have five basic needs,

eating

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and eating

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food

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one

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of them. Without eating

food

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people

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can not survive.

People

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has

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to eat

food

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to stand in

this

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competitive world. To do so

people

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choose their own eating way consequent to their affordability. Some

people

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loves

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love

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to eat restaurant foods while others

loves

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love

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to eat their own

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homemade

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home made

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homemade

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foods. Both

side

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have strong arguments but in case of my

opinion

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I choose

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home

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a home

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to eat

food

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. It is true that eating

food

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restaurant

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a restaurant

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more enjoyable than

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home

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at home

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. Restaurant

foods

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arefoods

werefoods

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always more delicious than

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home

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at home

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, in a

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restaurant

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restaurant

resturent

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they have always a professional

cooker

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cook

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who

have

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highly training

about

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food

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and he

know

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knows

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all the techniques how to cook

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food

a portion of food

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food

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to eat

more tasty

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tastier

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In-home

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the home

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home

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you cannot cook

food

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like a professional cooker.

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one

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restaurant

resturent

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restaurant

saves

people

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time.

One

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people

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who eat

food

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home

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they

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apply

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have to make

food

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first

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home

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. In doing these they

wast

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waste

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a lot of time.

Moreover

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restaurant

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the resturent

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resturent

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restaurants

people

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can

saw

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see

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and

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apply

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tast

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test

taste

last

different types of

food

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. Almost most types of

food

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across

acroos

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across

the world, a well-known

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restaurant

resturant

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restaurant

can provide. But

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home

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one

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people

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cannot cook more than two or three types of other

countries

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countries'

country's

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food

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. Thinking

all

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of all

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these

opinion

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opinions

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, some

people

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opine to eat

food

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restaurant

restaurants

resturant

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restaurants

food

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stands.

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homemade

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home made

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homemade

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food

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always

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hygenic

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hygienic

and fresh than

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restaurant

resturant

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restaurants

food

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stand.

Restutant

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Restaurant

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are

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not salubrious as like as

home

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-made

food

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. In our

country

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resturent

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restaurants

got

punish

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punished

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for their unhealthy environment usally and it is common

things

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thing

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few

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days ago two famous

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restaurant

restaurants

resturant

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restaurants

in our city

name

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named

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apply

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“Panshi” and “Pachbhai” got chastisement by our local administration for

found

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founding

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hair in rice and other spurious found in their kitchen.

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restaurant

restaurants

resturant

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restaurants

are

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always maintain a big amount of money.

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Homemade

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Home made

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Homemade

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food

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are

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always affordable.

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one

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people

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person

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who eat

food

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restaurant

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a resturant

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resturant

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restaurant

and

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that's

that

thats

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that's

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the amount of money spent there,

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in-home

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home

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the home

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five

people

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eat together in

these

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this

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amount of money.

Middle class

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and poor

people

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can’t afford it. In my opinion, I prefer to eat

food

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home

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the home

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. I am a man who always

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careful

carefull

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careful

about health and hygenicness. So

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that's

thats

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why I prefer

home

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to eat

food

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

385 words

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Some people prefer to eat food at food stands or restaurant. Other people prefer and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Give reason for your answer?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

36.Differences between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays, around the world, people can see the same films, fashion, brands, advertisements, and TV channels. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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