Some people think that travelling abroad is necessary while others believe it's not because TV and the Internet can give people the same information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Since online media have included to in modern days travelling, to visiting foreign countries become more unnecessary. While some individuals
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that travelling abroad can provide Correct your spelling
argued
argue
exclusive
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an exclusive
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which can not find on screen. However
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to go
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themselve
since it will Correct your spelling
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benefit
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experience
and sentimental value.
On the one hand, the proponents may suggest that experience
foreign countries Wrong verb form
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from
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via
internet
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the internet
are
fast, easy and Correct subject-verb agreement
is
cost saving
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cost-saving
This
is because people can acquire many informations
in Correct your spelling
information
amounts
of time as Fix the agreement mistake
amount
same
as visiting places by themselves. Correct article usage
the same
Moreover
, travelling by internet
may can
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apply
such
as accommodation rental and transportation. From these advantages, it can disregarded
the old fashion way of travelling. Change the verb form
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travellers
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who attend
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local
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a local
museum
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museums
the
place, because it Remove the redundancy
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easy
to access and they do not have to pay for Add a missing verb
is easy
plane
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a plane
ticket
to go there.
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tickets
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, traveling
abroad may Change the spelling
travelling
provided
an exclusive Change the verb form
provide
experience
which can not receive from the internet
. This
is because most of
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apply
online
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the online
medias
portrayed only the information from Correct your spelling
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viewpoint
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the
reality Correct article usage
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a
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of
aspects which they can not express. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, visiting foreign places by themselves will provide many situations which
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in which
to
the community, Change preposition
with
such
as talking to the natives and having local dishes and these Correct your spelling
experience
experiences
expererience
are valuable in mentality Correct your spelling
experiences
term
.
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the internet
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traveling
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themselves
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