Some people think that travelling abroad is necessary while others believe it's not because TV and the Internet can give people the same information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Since online media have included to in modern days travelling, to visiting foreign countries become more unnecessary. While some individuals

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argued

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that travelling abroad can provide

exclusive

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experience

which can not find on screen.

However

, in my personal judgment,

the

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travelling is worth

to go

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by

themselve

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themselves

since it will

benefits

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the

traveler

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in

experience

and sentimental value. On the one hand, the proponents may suggest that

experience

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foreign countries

from

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internet

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the internet

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are

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fast, easy and

cost saving

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.

This

is because people can acquire many

informations

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information

in

amounts

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of time as

same

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as visiting places by themselves.

Moreover

, travelling by

internet

may

can

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reduce redundant costs

such

as accommodation rental and transportation. From these advantages, it can

disregarded

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the old fashion way of travelling.

For example

, there are many Asian

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attend

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to

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VR-travelling in

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museum

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rather than go the

the

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place, because it

easy

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to access and they do not have to pay for

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a plane

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ticket

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to go there.

On the other hand

,

traveling

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travelling

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abroad may

provided

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an exclusive

experience

which can not receive from the

internet

.

This

is because most

of

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online

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medias

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media

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portrayed only the information from

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while

the

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reality

have

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a

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multiple

of

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aspects which they can not express.

Moreover

, visiting foreign places by themselves will provide many situations

which

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they can directly interact

to

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the community,

such

as talking to the natives and having local dishes and these

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experience

experiences

expererience

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experiences

are valuable in mentality

term

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. To summarize,

although

internet

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the internet

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can provide

a

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same information as same as

traveling

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travelling

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abroad, it is still necessary for the tourist to visit by

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themselves

themselve

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themselves

.

This

is because

this

way of

traveling

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travelling

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has more sentimental value and intense

experience

.