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Television sports shows such as Olympic are a good source of motivation for youths who do not like to exercise much. To you agree or disagree?

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One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal surge in the number of people believing that youngsters need to watch
sports
 activities on
television
.I completely agree with
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 statement and
this
 essay will delve into a discussion of my supporting view in the upcoming paragraphs. i To commence with, there are a number of reasons why youth watch
sports
 channels on
television
.
first
 and foremost, when they watch
sports
 events on
television
 and
internet
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 so they can create interest in
sports
 activities as they can do participates in various
sports
 and games. To elaborate, at that time they can learn many rules of
sports
 through watching international matches.
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 instance, a survey
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conducted by the department of education In the USA is
releved
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relieved
believed
 that when India has won 24 gold
medels
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medals
 in 2014. As
result
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, more than 40% growth
of
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 participants in the
Olympic
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 in India.
On the other hand
, Some individuals say that when they watch more
sports
 on
television
 so its effect
on
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their health and brain because they do not prefer to
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exercise
excercise
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exercise
 much. when they do not play
sports
then
 they
not
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 grow their confidence and teamwork.
In addition
, if they want to watch
sports
 live matches
then
 they try to go
playgrounds
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.they have no time because they have already more burden of their education. To capitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach
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a conclusion that the benefits and drawbacks
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are indeed too great to ignore.
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