Some people claim that workers should wear uniforms. Others allege that people should be free in their choice. Discuss both opinions, and give your own opinion.

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There is a debate concerning about
dress
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code for workers, and whether they should wear
uniform
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uniforms
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or
free
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in
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of
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their choice. I believe that it is quite important to wear working
outfits
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. Analysing the benefit of wearing formal
dress
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, as well as the drawback for that will prove
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. On the one hand, it is a good way to show
people
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’s attitude towards their job.
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,
people
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always need to participate in some business activities, like
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a business
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meeting
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meetings
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or visiting other companies. Wearing working
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cannot only show their professional career ability but
also
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give them more confidence,
this
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might keep a good impression
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another person.
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,
this
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makes it clear that
people
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will be beneficial from wearing formal
dress
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.
On the other hand
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,
people
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might feel uncomfortable
to wear
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such
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kind of uniform.
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, it is not easy to travel to other cities by public transportation
such
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as bus, train and airport. The space of seats might
quite
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small,
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would let them feel tired or inconvenient if they wear working
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to travel. But
people
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will overcome
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drawback if they have business travelling as much as possible. In conclusion, the benefit of wearing working
outfits
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overweight its drawback, so it is quite significant to have a formal
dress
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code for workers.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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