You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. In your letter, you should tell: • What you have done for the company in the year you worked there • What changes you would like to recommend • What training you require
Dear Mr Pyarry,
Good Day!
I am writing
this
letter to discuss about
the yearly appraisal meeting scheduled by you tomorrow as part of the annual discussion. As a team member in my previous Remove the preposition
apply
projects
, I shared multiple best practices to complete projects
in time that saved huge revenue to the company indirectly and those practices were adopted in other projects
to get fruitful results.
During this
tenure in this
organization, I come across multiple challenges due to old computer equipment in our office, based on my experience I suggest you consider cloud technologies in our organization and this
saves a large amount in terms of maintenance and we will be up to date with new tools in the current competitive market.
While we are adopting this new technologies
, I request you to arrange a training session for all our colleagues on the latest cloud tools and request you to arrange multiple workshop sessions by industry experts to implement them in a few of our Change the determiner
this new technology
these new technologies
projects
as best practices. While you are arranging the training sessions, please consider the current automation trend in the industry and hire dedicated trainers for that kind of technology.
For the discussion, I prepared a few slides to present my opinions which I explained earlier and the same will be presented in front of you.
Yours sincerely,
Chandra SekharSubmitted by sekhar.kandi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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