Some people say that no one should do the same job forever while others believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual, company and society. Discuss both view and give your opinion?

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infrequently can impact badly in
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’s daily life which can destroy a person’s carrier. Some individuals hold the
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that everyone should
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as well as for society. In
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I will analyse both aspects and my opinion is that changing
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once or twice in a persona carrier is fine but infrequently can be dangerous.
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which can help them in
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of life.
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changed
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have to face different situations
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they become more strong and intelligent.
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in a private
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to a
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types of environment which may help him to acquire more knowledge and be more skilled.
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, the more different
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you faced, the more skill you will have.
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think doing one
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is better than changing
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. The main reason is that doing
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longtime
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more chance to get
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which is more important in a person’s life. It’s
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achievement of one person’s employing-carrier provided that
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of encouragement which help them to do
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with more
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, he/she
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with more joy and fulfil all the needs that a
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expect
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them resulting in
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will
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their
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business
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business
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, if a
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profit, a nation or society gets
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as well. Because of
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, some
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say to not
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a
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continuously. To sum up,
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has some positive aspects as well as more negativity. While some
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say every
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should
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work
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routinely,
other
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others
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think a fixed
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has
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of benefits. In my opinion, it is better to stick
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and
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your best to
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develop
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develop
your position. But an occasional
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change
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is acceptable. Because in
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todays
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today's
world the number of unemployed
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is more than the number of
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to
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