Your friend invited you to his\her party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1- explain why you cannot come 2- give your reason for not contacting your friend sooner. 3- suggest another time to meet.

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Dear Dana, I was delighted to receive an invitation to your birthday party but,

unfortunately

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I won't be able to

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come

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com

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come

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. Actually, the night before your birthday one of my family

member

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became very sick and we called the ambulance for him. I had a very tough night in the hospital. His case become worse plus I had to stay with him in the hospital all

the

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night to take care of him. I didn't contact you earlier because there was a slight possibility to come

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least one hour to celebrate with you.

However

, his case become worst and I thought that would be

such

an inconvenient late cancellation

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I'm really sorry for that. Despite not being able to come, I have something for you. If you don't have any plans

week, I'd like to invite you somewhere to have dinner

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together

togather

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together

. Please let me know if you're available. I wish you a wonderful birthday and I cannot wait to

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meat

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6 paragraphs

166 words

6.00

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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