Buying things on the internet, suhc as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advanatges of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantges.

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Nowadays, due to

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advancements

advancement

advancementss

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advancements

in technologies more and more

people

prefer tobuyheir

things

such

as books, air tickets and groceries over the

internet

. The main

advantages

this

trend are that

people

can save

their

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valuable

time

and they have many options over

one

item, while the main disadvantages are that have

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delivery issues and

payment

problems. In my opinion, the

the

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benefits of

this

way

shopping

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of shopping

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outweigh the drawbacks and, I will explain my reason for it. On the

one

hand, there are many

advantages

of buying

things

on the

internet

First

and foremost,

people

can save

time

which they spend

to cover

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covering

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the distance to go to local shops and malls.

Secondly

, there are many options for

one

product from shopping online.

In other words

, If

people

shop

from

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the

internet

they get a

number

of choices on

one

product, which is not possible

this

way

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local shops or malls.

Also

, buying

things

especially grocery products on the

internetpeople

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internet people

got a

number

of offers on purchasing any

items

For example

, Flipkart Quick, an application for grocery

items

, deals with

number

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a number

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of grocery products along with a "buy

one

get

one

free" offer,and

as a result

, more and more individuals prefer to buy their household

things

from the

internet

On the other hand

, despite some

advantages

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it has

also

some drawbacks.

Firstly

, purchasing

things

online have delivery issues. To illustrate

this

, some

items

are taking a long

time

to deliver for that reason, some individuals hesitated to buy their

things

on the

internet

Secondly

payment

issue,

payment

on the

internet

is difficult,

this

is because of network issues.

For instance

, sometimes

payment

is completed but the order is not done, and

as a result

people

are facing a

number

of problems.

Furthermore

, in

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some cases

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some cases

somecases

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damaged

items

are delivered and

people

lost the money which they spent on them. But these problems can be solved by up to date about online shopping platforms and

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careful regarding payments. In conclusion, buying

things

on the

internet

have many benefits along with some drawbacks.

However

, in my opinion,

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think that buying

things

from the online market has many

advantages

than demerits because

people

save their

time

and they got a

number

of options on

one

item along with offers.

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Buying things on the internet, suhc as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advanatges of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantges.

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