Buying things on the internet, suhc as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advanatges of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantges.

Nowadays, due to
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advancements
advancement
advancementss
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advancements
in technologies more and more
people
prefer tobuyheir
things
such
as books, air tickets and groceries over the
internet
. The main
advantages
of
this
trend are that
people
can save
their
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valuable
time
and they have many options over
one
item, while the main disadvantages are that have
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delivery issues and
payment
problems. In my opinion, the
the
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benefits of
this
way
shopping
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outweigh the drawbacks and, I will explain my reason for it. On the
one
hand, there are many
advantages
of buying
things
on the
internet
.
First
and foremost,
people
can save
time
which they spend
to cover
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the distance to go to local shops and malls.
Secondly
, there are many options for
one
product from shopping online.
In other words
, If
people
shop
from
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the
internet
they get a
number
of choices on
one
product, which is not possible
this
way
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local shops or malls.
Also
, buying
things
especially grocery products on the
internetpeople
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internet people
got a
number
of offers on purchasing any
items
.
For example
, Flipkart Quick, an application for grocery
items
, deals with
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of grocery products along with a "buy
one
get
one
free" offer,and
as a result
, more and more individuals prefer to buy their household
things
from the
internet
.
On the other hand
, despite some
advantages
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it has
also
some drawbacks.
Firstly
, purchasing
things
online have delivery issues. To illustrate
this
, some
items
are taking a long
time
to deliver for that reason, some individuals hesitated to buy their
things
on the
internet
.
Secondly
,
payment
issue,
payment
on the
internet
is difficult,
this
is because of network issues.
For instance
, sometimes
payment
is completed but the order is not done, and
as a result
,
people
are facing a
number
of problems.
Furthermore
, in
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some cases
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some cases
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damaged
items
are delivered and
people
lost the money which they spent on them. But these problems can be solved by up to date about online shopping platforms and
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careful regarding payments. In conclusion, buying
things
on the
internet
have many benefits along with some drawbacks.
However
, in my opinion,
i
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think that buying
things
from the online market has many
advantages
than demerits because
people
save their
time
and they got a
number
of options on
one
item along with offers.
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