Buying things on the internet, suhc as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advanatges of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantges.

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delivery issues and

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which they spend

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the distance to go to local shops and malls.

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product from shopping online.

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local shops or malls.

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especially grocery products on the

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of offers on purchasing any

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of grocery products along with a "buy

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lost the money which they spent on them. But these problems can be solved by up to date about online shopping platforms and

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careful regarding payments. In conclusion, buying

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have many benefits along with some drawbacks.

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think that buying

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from the online market has many

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Buying things on the internet, suhc as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advanatges of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantges.

Your opinion

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A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

Sometimes, companies choose people based on their personality rather than skill set. Why do you think that is the case? What do you think is more important – personality or skills?

Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

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