some believe that old buildings should be protected by law. Others, however, thinks that they should be replaced by new buildings. Discuss both views and give your opinions

In
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world, because of the advent of new technologies construction and rebuilding a place is
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easy task when compared to
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. A fair number of people believe that traditional places should be protected by Government authorities whereas certain modern thinkers are considering the old
buildings
should be reconstructed
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new
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building
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. In my
opinion
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old
buildings
should be protected.
To begin
with , most of the
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ancient
buildings
have
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enormous history.
Therefore
, it should be conserved
then
only our future generation will get the idea about the lineage.
Moreover
, the large
buildings
are the inheritance of our forebears so it showcases our tradition and culture to
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. For
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, Fortkoch is one of the famous tourist attractions in Kerala. The main attraction of that place is the diversity of numerous old
buildings
. From there we will get the history of Kerala. Government should undertake some actions to preserve the
unvauable
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gifts of our forebears.
On the other hand
, because of the rapid surge in the
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most of the cities have become densely
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over crowded
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. Many people are facing difficulties to find a suitable stay. One solution for
this
horrible problem is renovating the old
buildings
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modern facilities. Now with the help of
latest
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technologies
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we can construct
buildings
very easily and can
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accommodate
accomodate
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accommodate
thousands of individuals in one place.
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,
recenly
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recently
mre
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more
and more flats are sprouting in cities .
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of the main advantages of
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is it can give shelter
for
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many people. A single building can rectify the housing issues in a well
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efficient
eficient
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manner. To conclude , in my
opinion
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the old
buildings
are
the
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part of our culture and history. Most of them are endangered
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our society. It should be protected
then
only our upcoming generation
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the value of our culture.
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