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Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behavior. Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People have differing views about the impact of watching
TV
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 on
children
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’s
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behavior
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.
Although
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 watching
television
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 can bring certain benefits for our kids, I suppose the disadvantages should not be ignored and
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 essay will analyze the reasons.
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 of all, there are a variety of programs on
television
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, but not all of them are suitable for
children
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.
Children
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 tend to mimic what they see on the
TV
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 and without parental guidance, they will accidentally watch shows that are inappropriate for them.
This
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 will cause the kid to misjudge the information from the shows, they cannot distinguish right from wrong.
For instance
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, when a
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 show is broadcasting
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violence
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 content,
children
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 who saw it will think that action is allowed and they might imitate it.
Thus
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,
this
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 could influence a child's
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behavior
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behaviour
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 and in the
worst case
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 scenario, it becomes
a
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the
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 start of future crime.
Secondly
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, we cannot discount the effect that screen
time
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 has on
children
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, particularly on the physical level. If
children
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 are exposed to a
TV
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 screen for an excessive amount of
time
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, it will affect their eyesight problems and makes
children
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’s bodies weak due to a lack of physical activities and leads
children
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 to a sedentary lifestyle. Not to mention, they can be at risk of certain diseases
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 as obesity.
Additionally
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, the amount of
time
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 letting
children
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 watch
TV
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 can
also
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 negatively affect family relationships. When parents are too busy and their kids are getting noisy and impatient, they tend to use
TV
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 as a distraction.
As a result
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,
children
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 are lacking in paying attention to everything. The analytical report has defined,
when
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that when
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 kids are watching a long period of
television
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, it will affect their
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behavior
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behaviour
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. In conclusion, the
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behavior
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behaviour
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 of the
children
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 will be affected by both type and duration of
time
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 of watching
television
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.
Therefore
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, parents should take responsibility for the selection of
TV
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 programs and watching
time
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 management.
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