Pollution around the world is becoming a serious problem. Do you think this is a problem that should be solved internationally or at a local level?

Environmental degradation is taking place at an alarming rate all over the world.

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it is the duty of every individual to practice sustainability

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considering the severity of the problem, in my opinion, the major responsibility lies with the international organizations as they have more resources to spare for innovating substantial solutions to tackle

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ever-increasing global warming and environmental pollution. To start with, if the various governments collaborate on an international forum, they can lay targets to mitigate the practices that utilize non-biodegradable resources.

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, a target of 2040 was set for all UN countries to replace gasoline automobiles with electric vehicles. Not only, it has made allied provinces work towards the goal but has

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encouraged under-developed nations to follow the lead.

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nations have had more experience with the problems of the environment and the remedies to

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problems. They can exchange their knowledge which poorer countries can utilize to practice eco-techniques. On the other side, if only local municipalities are involved

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environmental hazards, their results will be minimal. It is because they can only raise awareness for small initiatives,

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, recycling, reusing, planting trees or using public transportation. Though these should be followed by individuals, they are not effective solutions if we see them on a larger scale.

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and resources available to small organizations, they can not invest much in the research and development of green technology to improve or replace their existing practices.

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, in order to have comprehensive results, the problem of pollution must be dealt with at the global level. Community contributions are important, but if we really want to save our planet

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countries should forget their differences and must put efforts collectively toward effective solutions.