You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Mia, How are you doing my dear friend, how are your family and boyfriend doing? I'm writing

this

letter in connection with my visit to meet you in Canada in July.

First

of all, one of my cousins is getting engaged in July just a day before my departure from my home country. Since

this

is an important event after my uncle's death, everybody in my family wishes me to stay here for her big day. I'm extremely sorry for the sudden change of plan but I have no other choice right now and you know how much my family means to me. I understand that we had a lot of plans for my visit there, but the situation requires me to stay here.

Furthermore

, I have another suggestion for the situation.

Instead

of coming in July, I will be changing my tickets to August, so we can have fun together just a month later. And

also

, I can witness fall and winter together at the same time as my travel. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovely, Akila

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8 paragraphs

181 words

6.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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