One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him at the airport on time. Write a letter asking him to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to identify you.

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Dear Sean, I did receive your mail which mentioned all the flight details. Unfortunately, I do not think I will be able to be there on time because my exam finishes at 10:30 am.

However

, It takes only thirty minutes to get there from the examination hall,

therefore

I`ll be able to be there at the airport around 11:15 am.

Although

it is a two hours delay which I am sure you won`t feel it, once you start doing shopping at the duty-free shopping complex. You should

also

try the Sri Lankan cafe latte at the Cafe Bar which is located on the

second

floor of the same premises. Shall we meet up at the visiting area around 11:30 am ? Since

this

is the

first

time we will be meeting each other, we have to figure out a way to identify. I was thinking of wearing a red coloured Polo t-shirt with a blue jean

also

to put up my red coloured cap so you won`t find it difficult to spot me amoung the crowd. How about you ? let me know what you are planning to wear as well. I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes Migara

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

201 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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