Many agricultural lands are being converted into commercial centres. How does this affect the environment and the people’s lifestyle? Discuss this situation and provide suggestions to address these issues. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

Nowadays,
population
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is increasing day by day to provide
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to them results in converted agricultural
land
into commercial or residential
centres
.It affects adversely on
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and
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and
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the
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people's lifestyle.
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affects
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and
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and
will provide some solutions to tackle
this
problem. To commence with, the
government
is taking
land
from
farmers
to initiate shopping malls. It had some bad
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affects
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such
as most of the
farmers
are depending on the agriculture they earn and feed their
family
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families
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if their
land
will
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seized by the
government
to build commercial
centres
they have no source of
income
.
Secondly
, noise pollution increases due to more traffic on the roads and people
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the horn
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horn
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.
For instance
, a survey conducted by Amritsar city found that noise pollution near malls is more than
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other part of the city.
Moreover
, creatures
such
as insects and birds who live
in
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the farms will extinct because they
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their habitat.
Hence
, it leads to
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the problem
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problem
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on
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source
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the source
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of
income
and
environment
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the environment
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.
On the other hand
, these problems can be solved by
follow
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solutions.
First
,
government
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the government
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should
makealls
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make all
or shopping
centres
on
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the draught area where farming is not possible
such
as desert
area
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areas
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. It will save the
income
of
farmers
who are earning from farming and
waste
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wasteland
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land
will
utilized
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by the commercial
centres
.
Second
, it will
also
reduce noise pollution from the cities and
on
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in
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desert
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the desert
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there is not much population so
this
issue can
also
be tackled.
In addition
,
government
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the government
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should help
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a farmer
the farmer
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farmer
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farmers
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in farming by funding grants,
latest
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equipment so that they can yield more and it will definitely benefit
for
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both
farmers
and the
government
. To conclude, in my opinion, making malls on farmer's
land
is not a good solution it has adverse
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effects
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affects
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effects
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on
environment
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the environment
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and
income
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the income
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of
farmers
. The
government
should utilise infertile
land
to make commercial
centres
.
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