Many agricultural lands are being converted into commercial centres. How does this affect the environment and the people’s lifestyle? Discuss this situation and provide suggestions to address these issues. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.
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population
is increasing day by day to provide Add an article
the population
shelters
to them results in converted agricultural Fix the agreement mistake
shelter
land
into commercial or residential centres
.It affects adversely on the
envy Correct article usage
apply
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and
nad
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and
the
people's lifestyle. Correct article usage
apply
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essay will discuss its Correct your spelling
effects
affects
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effects
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and
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will provide some solutions to tackle Correct your spelling
and
this
problem.
To commence with, the government
is taking land
from farmers
to initiate shopping malls. It had some bad Replace the word
effects
affects
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effects
such
as most of the farmers
are depending on the agriculture they earn and feed their family
if their Fix the agreement mistake
families
land
willChange the verb form
be
government
to build commercial centres
they have no source of income
. Secondly
, noise pollution increases due to more traffic on the roads and people blow
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blowing
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the horn
a horn
horn
. Fix the agreement mistake
horns
For instance
, a survey conducted by Amritsar city found that noise pollution near malls is more than any
other part of the city. Change preposition
in any
Moreover
, creatures such
as insects and birds who live in
the farms will extinct because they Change preposition
on
loss
their habitat. Replace the word
lose
Hence
, it leads to Add an article
the problem
a problem
problem
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problems
on
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with
source
of Add an article
the source
income
and environment
.
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the environment
On the other hand
, these problems can be solved by follow
solutions. Change the verb form
following
First
, government
should Add an article
the government
makealls
or shopping Correct your spelling
make all
centres
on
the draught area where farming is not possible Change preposition
in
such
as desert area
. It will save the Fix the agreement mistake
areas
income
of farmers
who are earning from farming and waste
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wasteland
land
will utilized
by the commercial Change the verb form
be utilized
centres
. Second
, it will also
reduce noise pollution from the cities and on
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in
desert
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the desert
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areas
area
there is not much population so Add a comma
,area
this
issue can also
be tackled. In addition
, government
should help Add an article
the government
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a farmer
the farmer
farmer
in farming by funding grants, Fix the agreement mistake
farmers
latest
equipment so that they can yield more and it will definitely benefit Correct article usage
the latest
for
both Change preposition
apply
farmers
and the government
.
To conclude, in my opinion, making malls on farmer's land
is not a good solution it has adverse Replace the word
effects
affects
on Correct your spelling
effects
environment
and Correct article usage
the environment
income
of Correct article usage
the income
farmers
. The government
should utilise infertile land
to make commercial centres
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