Car ownership has increased so repidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
These days,
transportation
is one of the most crucial factors in parts of people
's lives. If people
have their own cars, they will easily drive themselves to their office every work day. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this
statement, and I will give rational explanations with effective measures to reduce using cars on the road taken an action by governments
.
Nowadays, most people
around the world have their own car
because many companies advertise a worth promotion which is a month-payment without interest. And that is
so attractive for people
who prefer to have a car
. It is more comfortable than using public transportation
because they can go anywhere whenever they want, but it leads to a huge issue in the big city which is traffic jams. Bangkok, for example
, is the capital of Thailand which is just a small town with a brunch of facilities. Thai people
normally come to find a job in Bangkok and most of them are car
owners. That is
a reason for the terrible traffic that still didn't solve until now.
Some people
think that good public transportation
can effectively solve this
problem which governments
have to face. Encouraging another alternative for people
to public travel for work saves more money. For instance
, governments
have to provide busses, trams, trains, or skylines for working people
and others who want to use, which are always on time and cheaper than using their own vehicles. Hence
, the number of people
who use public transportation
will increase.
In conclusion, everyone has their own car
because it is more comfortable than using public transportation
, but governments
can change their mindset by improving public transportation
in their countries.Submitted by PM on
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