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Some people believe that school should teach foreign language for primary school children. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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English and Chinese are the most spoken idioms all over the World,
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 creating the need to teach even little children at least one foreign language. There are many upsides to
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 choice, but
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 the downsides have to be taken into consideration.
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 of all, as a little child is easier to learn a new language since you will not see it as another one, but you would mother tongue in both.
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, a bilingual child would not know the difference between the two idioms and would speak them in the same way and at the same level, which would be a huge improvement, since he would be able not only to travel
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 but
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 to work everywhere in the World.
On the other hand
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, someone believes that teaching two languages at the same time would slow down the learning curve and create confusion in children.
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, it is very common for a bilingual child to speak both languages at the same time, forming phrases with words that come from different idioms. Even if,
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 may seem a good thing, actually it may create a barrier with other children, making it difficult to create strong friendships. In conclusion, there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages to both solutions, but being bilingual is the most precious gift that your parents may give to you.
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, you will be able to move easily in the World and make friends with people on the opposite side of the planet.
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