You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe your plans for the party • invite your neighbour to come
Dear John,
This
is Mary, your neighbor
who moved to Change the spelling
neighbour
this
town last
month. I hope you are doing well. I am writing to invite you to my son's birthday party next Friday.
The party will start at 7 p.m. We have invited our neighbors
and some close friends. There will be various dishes Change the spelling
neighbours
such
as fried foods, pizza, and veggies with spicy or delightful flavors
. Guests are welcome to arrive anytime, whether early or on time, and seating will be arranged by the host. Once everyone is settled, we will enjoy our meal together. We have Change the spelling
flavours
also
planned some games to help guests bond and have fun. The last
activity will be the celebration of my son's birthday, and the party will wrap up by 10 p.m.
I hope you can join this
happy occasion; it’s a great chance for us to get to know each other. While
parties can sometimes be a bit noisy, I hope you can understand. If the noise does become too disruptive, please feel free to let me know.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
MarySubmitted by aa0963178783 on
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coherence cohesion
Your letter has a clear logical structure, but consider separating different ideas into distinct paragraphs for better readability.
coherence cohesion
The logical flow can be improved for a higher score. For instance, details about the noise can be integrated more smoothly into the description of the party plan.
suitable writing tone
You have a very clear and friendly tone, which is perfect for this type of letter.
task achievement
You have successfully addressed all parts of the task, including introducing yourself, describing your plans, and inviting your neighbor.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite