A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called “The book that influence me most. In your letter Describe what this book was about Explain how this book influenced you Say whether this book be likely to influence other people Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that recently I read a
book
“autobiography of Bill Gates” which explains Use synonyms
microlevel
details of Correct your spelling
micro-level
Mr.
Bill Gates’s life and struggles he did from Change the punctuation
Mr
the
childhood till date. As I understood, the magazine Correct article usage
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being
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an article
article
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articles
book
read and motivated to readers presently. One of the Use synonyms
chapter
from the Change to a plural noun
chapters
book
can be published as an article which explains Use synonyms
about
“academic study and intelligence”.
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Mr
Gates
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computer
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inclination
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his inclination
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toward
academic
years. During practical Correct pronoun usage
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class
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classes
laboratory
, he used to spend a lot of Add an article
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times
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time
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gaining
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was
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of
the
school due to poor performance in various subjects, from Correct article usage
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man Change the article
the richest
of
the planet.
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on
today
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my mind and Change the verb form
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motivated
. I am damp sure that the Correct pronoun usage
memotivated
book
will be definitely liked by all readers.
I will draft and send Use synonyms
article
to you through email on Add an article
the article
an article
editor’s
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the editor’s
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review and final approval before publishing Linking Words
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it in
magazine
.
I look forward to Correct article usage
the magazine
hear
from you.
Yours sincerely,
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.