Some people say history is one of the most important school subject other people think that, in today's world, science and technology are more important than history.

There is a widespread phenomenon that

one

of the most significant

school

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is

history

while others are of the view that science and

technology

are more beneficial globally than

History

.

This

essay shall endorse the former notion.

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the two divergent views shall

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after which a meaningful conclusion shall be drawn. On

one

hand preservation of culture is

one

of the enormous reasons

people

believe

history

is

one

of the paramount themes in

school

. With the

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of our society, the younger generations have to be in the known of what has transpired before they were born and that can only be done through

history

lessons. As they understand and pass it on, they are protecting their cultural heritage for

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generations yet unborn. Admittedly studying

history

as

one

of the

school

themes will go a long way to help the

the

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younger generations to know what happened before their ancestors got to where they currently are.

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, a recent survey conducted by the ministry of education indicated that

,

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in

Ghana

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most children know the meaning of the

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in our national flag

as a result

of the

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early morning

history

class introduced recently

On the other hand

, improvement in our way of communicating is

one

of the main reasons

people

believe science and

technology

are more beneficial than

history

.

Technology

has helped develop

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devices like mobile phones which help to transfer information within the shortest possible time than writing letters. Even though messages are transferred quickly,

that

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not withstanding

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measures have to be deployed to ensure the

history

of the

people

do

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not fade away.

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instance

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most students could not recite the national anthem and plague.

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the government was able to deploy measures to ensure students know it increasing the number from 20% to75% of the total population of students In

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after assessing the two divergent views, it is felt that the merits

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studying

history

as a

school

subject

is

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more than science and

technology

. I will

therefore

recommend that the government and opinion leaders should put in measures as

this

will go a long way to conserve the rich culture of the

people

.