Some people say history is one of the most important school subject other people think that, in today's world, science and technology are more important than history.

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while others are of the view that science and

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are more beneficial globally than

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the two divergent views shall

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after which a meaningful conclusion shall be drawn. On

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hand preservation of culture is

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of the enormous reasons

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believe

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is

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of the paramount themes in

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of our society, the younger generations have to be in the known of what has transpired before they were born and that can only be done through

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lessons. As they understand and pass it on, they are protecting their cultural heritage for

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generations yet unborn. Admittedly studying

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as

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of the

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younger generations to know what happened before their ancestors got to where they currently are.

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, a recent survey conducted by the ministry of education indicated that

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most children know the meaning of the

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in our national flag

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class introduced recently

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, improvement in our way of communicating is

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of the main reasons

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believe science and

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are more beneficial than

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has helped develop

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devices like mobile phones which help to transfer information within the shortest possible time than writing letters. Even though messages are transferred quickly,

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measures have to be deployed to ensure the

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of the

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not fade away.

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most students could not recite the national anthem and plague.

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the government was able to deploy measures to ensure students know it increasing the number from 20% to75% of the total population of students In

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after assessing the two divergent views, it is felt that the merits

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more than science and

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recommend that the government and opinion leaders should put in measures as

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will go a long way to conserve the rich culture of the

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