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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Most individuals hold the view that today we have the vast majority of options. I agree with
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 statement because
people
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 can choose different options due to the development of the industries and globalization of the world. Many
people
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 think that they can have a chance to select any product or
service
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 due to the industrial development of nations.
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, there are several companies and organizations in all most countries which produce the same product or
service
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 with different qualities. So,
people
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 can select the best according to their preferences. In Sri Lanka,
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, there are plenty of mobile phone companies
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 as Dialog, Mobitel or Hutch, which provide some kind of
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 with different benefits. The public can select the best
service
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 for them.
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, due to globalization,
people
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 are more educated about many aspects.
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, they can communicate with
people
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 in other countries without travelling overseas and they can purchase them easily.
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, they do not need to worry about the unavailability of a thing in their native country.
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, Sri Lankan can buy any type of mobile phone within Sri Lanka even if they are not produced here. In conclusion, many argue that in present days there are much more selections that can choose. I agree with
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 as there are several modalities of production
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 of industrial development as well as globalization.
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Word Count

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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