Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live.

Dear Raju, I hope you’re fit and fine and
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letter finds you at best. I received your letter and felt happy that you’re thinking to take admission to the university where I studied. During ,
study
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I stayed in
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hostel campus of the university located near
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Pandya bridge in MV hall which is quite big and clean as compared to other halls. I would suggest
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the same hall where I stayed considering cleanliness, transportation availability and the kind of students staying there. I have noticed that students take bigger flats to rent at a far distance from university in a residential area and
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connectivity, nuisance from neighbours, and several other issues. There may not be stationary, cybecafé, or xerox/printing facilities which may be required often while studying and preparing for exams. I would suggest visiting the place before finalizing where you want to stay during your study. Give my regards to your parents. Best regards,
Jagjith
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Jagjit
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