You have reccently moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all the communication there. Write a letter to your bank Branch. In this letter mention: Where you have moved ?Mumbai What problem are you facing regarding the bank's communication? Bill generation What do you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I migrated to Toronto in January but your branch still sending my bank documents to my previous home location. I would like to tell you that

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year I got a job at Google company.

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, I have moved from Surrey to Toronto. In February I contacted the customer care of your bank and I gave them my new address for mails.

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, I did not get my monthly credit card statements from February month as well as the bank did not send me my car loan bills to my new address which caused me substantial inconvenience. I would greatly appreciate it if you could email me the missing statements of my credit card so that I can pay my balance. I would be thankful if you could change my address .

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, I can receive my letters on a time. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mark jones

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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162 words

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