More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In the era of modernization, people are planning to have kids at later age Compared to the old generation.
Although
having children
when parents
are mature enough has some profit, it brings a host of drawbacks. This
essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
First
of all, the youngsters always think about the best time for having a child
will come and today is so soon for that. Unfortunately, there is no best time because problems
in life are never ended, and this
is very important to understand. They think when Things like financial and mental situations are in a steady state, it is the time to have a baby
. With this
mindset, they have to wait for the best moment, and this
waiting leads to long, and they can easily lose their chance of having a baby
. Also
, another problem with having a baby
in old age is children
who have old parents
may have lower confidence than children
has younger parents
in school.
On the other hand
, if you have children
when you don't have proper jobs and good financial and mental conditions, it may have a bad influence on your child
. For example
, when parents
do not have money to buy some clothes for their child
, having a child
for them is a crystal clear mistake. Another reason is that some couples who have big problems
with each other think that problem will fix by having a baby
, and this
is not true because not only that problem will not fix, but also
they have to face those problems
with a harmful child
.
To conclude, the best to have a child
is when couples are ready for providing basic needs of their children
and when they don't have game-changing problems
with each other.Submitted by hosseininariman on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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