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A Museum Near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary / unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary / unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary / unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to show my keen interest in doing some voluntary
work
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 which you posted before some days. I like to
work
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 in
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a museum
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museum
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museums
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 as
unpaid
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an unpaid
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 worker
,
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apply
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 because I am new in Canada. If I am working with you
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, I get a chance to meet new
persons
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people
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 and
communicating
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 with them. I can learn new skills by doing
this
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work
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. Regarding my skills, I have very good computer
skill
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skills
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 which maybe
help
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 you in data entry.
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, I can
work
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team
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a team
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 environment with other
persons
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people
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. I have read several books
of
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on
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 history and opted
history
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for history
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 as my elected subject in the 10th grade. So, I can
work
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 as
guide
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a guide
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 in the Museum. As I am a student right now, I am available on Friday to Sunday from 10:30 AM to 7:00 PM.
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, If you decide to hire me, I can start right away. I am hoping that you would be kind enough to review my profile and consider me as a deserving candidate for the post. Your faithfully, Utsav Patel
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Volunteer
  • Part-time
  • Unpaid work
  • Museum director
  • Skills and qualities
  • Customer service
  • Organization
  • Team player
  • Flexible
  • Reliable
  • Positive attitude
  • Availability
  • Professional goals
  • Community contribution
  • References
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