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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#experts #children #language #schools #school #outweigh
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Globalisation requires people to be proficient in linguistics so some countries set up a foreign
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besides
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 their mother tongue at the elementary level. It is believed by educationalists, that kids should learn a foreign
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 from the very beginning of their education and I firmly agree with
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 idea. On the one hand, there are two main reasons to support early learning of a foreign
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, at a young age, children have high grasping power, so they can take lesser time to learn a new dialect. To exemplify, a four-year age-old kid will need lesser time than a fifty-year-old person due to their brain formality.
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, folk need to learn new dialects if they want to settle abroad due to their better future. To elaborate, they will get preference rather than a person only knowing his mother tongue.
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, there are some issues that need to be paid attention if a young do not want to go abroad for his job,
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 learning a foreign dialect would be worthless.
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, if a child after getting graduation wants to do jobs in the IT sector in his own country, learning a foreign dialect would be a waste of time. Another drawback is that kids do not possess the required decision-making skills in the early stage of their life as compared to secondary school where they could understand their field of interest. So, if they do not choose a career in the
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 it would not be a wise decision to learn a non-regional
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 in primary school. In conclusion, from the above-mentioned discussion, though there are some negative sides
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 learning a foreign
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 at the elementary level, the benefits are greater than the drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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