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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is expected that in the coming years,
people
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 will read e-news and e-
books
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instead
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 of printed
newspapers
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 their
cost effectiveness
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. I completely agree with
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 view because of their ease and convenience,
although
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 printed
newspapers
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 and
books
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 still have their cultural and
tranditional
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traditional
 values. With regard to the benefits, the primary reason for the growing preference for digital content is its economic advantage. Unlike physical materials, digital content is often available free of cost or for a small fee.
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, it is easy to find desired materials online, which may be difficult to obtain in physical shops.
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, if someone needs a book
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 not published in their country or city, they can easily find it on the relevant website.
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, online tools like Google Translate provide translations for content that
people
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 may
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 struggle to understand.
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, printed
newspapers
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 and
books
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 still have value in society.
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, many readers enjoy the physical experience of holding or reading a book, which is something online reading cannot replace.
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, older generations often prefer reading a newspaper with tea in the morning because it feels more natural than scrolling on a phone.
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, printed materials are free from distractions
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 as notifications, games, or social media, which usually disturb readers on electronic devices.
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, printed
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 and
newspapers
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 may continue to exist for
people
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 who value focus and tradition. In conclusion,
although
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 digital reading is becoming more popular
due to
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 its affordability and convenience, printed
books
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 and
newspapers
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 still hold cultural and practical importance. It is
therefore
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 unlikely that they will disappear completely, as many
people
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 continue to appreciate the unique experience and focus that only physical reading can provide.

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grammar
Fix small grammar slips and spelling, like 'tranditional' to 'traditional'.
structure
Add smoother links to join ideas between paragraphs.
content
Think about a view you may not agree with and say why you still think your view is right.
task
Clear view is given and kept through the essay.
coherence
Good use of linking words like 'Firstly' and 'On the other hand'.
structure
Conclusion restates idea well.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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