Poor students or students who come from rural areas often find it is difficult to get access to the university education, so some people think universities should make it easier for them to study at. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that
university
should do Fix the agreement mistake
universities
same
consideration Correct article usage
the same
for
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to
rural
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the rural
a rural
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student
to get Fix the agreement mistake
students
an
admission Correct article usage
apply
for
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to
a
higher education. We are going to discuss here Remove the article
apply
the
government intervention Correct your spelling
that
are
more important. I will give my opinion in the conclusion, now we are going to discuss and elaborate with a relevant example.
On the one hand, Lack of Change the verb form
is
technology
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technical
issue
in the rural area as well as connectivity. Fix the agreement mistake
issues
Moreover
, higher type schooling is not getting in the village Linking Words
school
which effect Use synonyms
on
pupil study. Change preposition
apply
For example
, in comparison with Linking Words
urban
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an urban
area
, they have a good Fix the agreement mistake
areas
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school
, Fix the agreement mistake
schools
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a variety
variety
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various
technologies
and Change preposition
of technologies
high
professional teaching Replace the word
highly
method
. To elaborate, rural students are not aware Fix the agreement mistake
methods
about
anything which they Change the preposition
of
lacking
in extra knowledge. Development is very important in the rural area like a city.
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lack
Furthermore
, Linking Words
government
has to be more Add an article
the government
focus
on the villagers. Replace the word
focused
There
people are financially not well to take Replace the word
Their
admission
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admitted
in
expensive Change preposition
to
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school
Few are not sending their child Fix the agreement mistake
schools
school
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for
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to
learn
. Change the verb form
learning
administration
has to take Add an article
the administration
stand
for Correct article usage
a stand
rural
Add an article
the rural
a rural
Use synonyms
student
. Fix the agreement mistake
students
For instance
, Same Linking Words
of
nationals are Change preposition
apply
providing
free education until they are not standing on Wrong verb form
provided
his
own foot. Correct pronoun usage
their
Likewise
, Linking Words
regime
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the regime
have
to give free food in Change the verb form
has
school
, free hospital for poor people as well as good technology in Use synonyms
school
for Use synonyms
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student
. That will help to learn poor Add an article
the student
a student
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student
with Fix the agreement mistake
students
talent
to achieve good Add an article
the talent
a talent
score
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scores
in
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on
exam
.
To conclude, I think I Fix the agreement mistake
exams
am agree
with the above sentence but if government take any discission for poverty pupil, it will not require Change the verb form
agree
for
Change preposition
apply
university
to change Add an article
the university
a university
rule
for rural and urbanAdd an article
the rule
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite