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Educaiton should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of educaiton, from primary school to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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Education is an essential part of our life. People often claim that studying in a small
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 is easier to learn than in a larger
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, while others believe that the larger
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 is better for
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 to study. I will discuss both sides of
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 topic and give my opinion in
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 essay. On
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 hand, there are several reasons why learning in a small
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 should be encouraged. The
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 and most important reason is that it's easier to keep up with what the teacher is teaching. Another reason is that the
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 is quieter so
students
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 can be more concentrated on the lesson.
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, people think that a larger
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 is much better. The main
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students
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 can make new friends, improve social skills
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, in a larger
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,
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 can become more confident because they have to make a speech in front of a crowd. The
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 reason is they get to know more new pieces of knowledge.
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, admission can work in groups and exchange knowledge with each other. To my way of thinking, a larger
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 is the
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 I will choose because I love making new friends and learning more brand new pieces
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 about life.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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